Tuesday, September 4, 2007

Teenage issues!!!!!!(revised)

I think that a big issue for teens is sex. Sex has such an affect on teens. I have never had sex and don't plan on doing it untill I'm married. Teens seem to think that if they have sex they'll be accepted and they'll be making the people they like happy. A lot of teens think that if they don't have sex, they won't be cool. I think otherwise.

I have heard a lot of female teens say that if they dont have sex with the guy she thinks she loves or he'll leave her.So teenage women have sex to satisfy their boyfriends.

Teenage men have sex to "fit in". Guys seem to think that if your a certain age and still a virgin, then there is something wrong with you. They also do it for pleasure.

The media has no help in promoting abstinence. The media just encourages teens to have sex by showing vulgure things. I just think that if teens save themselves for marriage there would be less drama.

1 comment:

lindsey said...

This is good insight Cindy! I agree; there would definitely be less drama.

Fix a few things before you move on.

#1. Check out your last paragraph. There are quite a few silly mistakes.

#2. This is something to store in your brain. A lot is always two words. Alot is not a word.

#3. "Okay Well" A lot of us think we can write this way because we talk this way. In formal writing, we don't start sentences with 'okay'.

Good job Cindy!